literature

TAR

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I pick up my feet
    and watch
Boiling, black, bubbling,
      while it cra w  l   s
Atom by atom
          toward me.
Already lost the cat.
             I hear it in there.
I cant bite my lip
Any. Harder.
Feet, throat, eyes
            burning sore
It sticks to every
          available surface
Boiling, black, bubbling,
      my voice is insignificant
This home is uninhabitable
    I hate it here.
A description of my new house.
I hate it so much.
It's disgusting and it reeks of smoke and dog urine.
I feel like the smell is getting on everything I have and I guess it is.

The bolding of letters was to show tar had gotten on them.
I thought it was a cool idea.
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Myrethy's avatar
I love your idea of making some of the letters black to represent the tar, it's creative and cool!